Three Friends
Every person needs trustworthy, funny and creative friends. You need these types of friends especially when you’re the youngest in the class. Three of my friends are Lenin, Jonathan and Maddy. each of them has one of these qualities.
Lenin is a good friend of mine. He and I know games that the other one will like. We have identical minds. We both like video games. He comes to my house every Wednesday after school and we play all break long. It’s good to have a friend you trust.
Jonathan is a funny person. One time he put a bunch of ponytails in his hair. He has so many Legos I could die. The first time I went to his house I went screaming out the front door because of all the Legos. I like to go to his house. I’ve known him so long. I’ve known Jonathan since playgroup. It’s good to have a funny friend.
Maddy is very creative. She makes many games. We like to play games like Dream State and Mutants. Dream State is a game where you take portals into the different dimensions. Mutants is a game where you make your own Xman. It’s good to have a friend that is creative.
I have many more friends than these--Kaliana, Alisha, Emi and many others. Being small you need many people to be your friend. Life is hard but easier if you have these types of friends.
Malachi, Nice essay. Very well organized and written with a sweetness that makes me smile. You also made very good points about the reason you enjoy each friend. Nice!
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ReplyDeleteThank you for this great essay. When I read it, I learned so much about your friends and WHY they are your friends. I bet they will ALWAYS be your friends because you are a good friend to them.
Merny
Thank you, Malachi. I am touched. I'm glad you said that I was creative. Thank you.
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