"CHARGE!" General Tuna with his tuna army charging to Mer City, slaughtering all in their path. Merman and Mermaid flee from their cavalry and gunmen. Clams whistle through the water at flesh striping speeds. Even sharks flee their army. General Tuna or Gtuna told the dolphins to go in front. (Did you know that dolphins and tuna are great friends?)
The city was slowly devoured by the army. Every city was killed. It was like a swarm of locusts going from one town to another. Then Gtuna rode to the City of Mer, the golden city on the top of the coral reef. O, the jewels they would get, the endless showers of gold.
"But, best of all, even King Triton will bow before him," thought Gtuna. "And the barbarians from the surface. All would be his."
"But, best of all, even King Triton will bow before him," thought Gtuna. "And the barbarians from the surface. All would be his."
"Uh, sir," said a soldier. "What are you doing?"
"Uh, sorry... CHARGE!"
The city fell in less then 42 minutes. Then, finally, King Triton himself said in the voice of Gandalf, "You Shell Not Pass!"
"Die, old man, your city has fallen. You next," Gtuna laughed.
"Oh, god," said Triton.
"Archers, fire at him," ordered Gtuna. dun dun dun...Gtuna's dream came true.
"Die, old man, your city has fallen. You next," Gtuna laughed.
"Oh, god," said Triton.
"Archers, fire at him," ordered Gtuna. dun dun dun...Gtuna's dream came true.
Wow! That was a very dramatic story.
ReplyDeleteI like the "You shell not pass." super funny. The dramatitic sound effects... dun dun dun are hilarious too.
ReplyDeleteNice flow.... I like it! Very dramatic.
ReplyDeleteI thought the giant squid photo was pretty creepy. What do you think guys. See you at school.
ReplyDeleteI agree, the giant squid photo is creepy. I also like how the beginning of the story unfolds as we read it. You write it in the present tense which adds to the drama.
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